Thursday, July 26, 2012

Sixty dollars' worth


From a hiding place in the attic, Ariel watched her father walk
away from the house. Dusk was gathering, with the sun setting behind
her house, and so a long shadow preceded the man. David, her father,
walked with a weary, unhurried step, shuffling a bit. Small clouds
of dust, pale yellow in the oblique rays of the sun puffed up with
his every step and settled slowly.

Another shadow, dancing and distorted, was cast onto David's broad
back. The man who cast it was a veritable runt beside Ariel's
father. He, too, walked slowly. He had no reason to hurry. He did
not particularly enjoy his job but his job it was, so he would walk
David out to the landfill at the edge of the town and shoot him.

The long, tan limbs of the girl were aching from being scrunched up
within her hiding spot. The dusty tarp covering several old bicycles
also hid her from sight and it never occured to the policemen that
David wasn't alone in the house. Of the four men that came to get
her father, three drove off after bringing him outside. The one
remaining was now herding him to the landfill.

They weren't even twenty steps distant yet and Ariel stared straight
at the sweat-stained back in a grey uniform with blue piping. She
could see where the stitching where it crossed on the back of the
tunic, so bright was the reddish sunlight. She thought of the rifle
her father used to have. If only she still had it! She'd have aimed
three inches above that x when so close. She knew that because she'd
often hit a drink can dead center when aiming at its top.

The two men walked in silence, thirty, then fifty meters
distant. David did not even strain for a lunge, did not turn
back. He knew where the stubby black muzzle was aimed. Ariel thought
of the sixty dollars Dad got for the old beaten bolt action in a
"buy-back" and that sixty meters was its close zero. "Better get
something than fight them over this old thing" David said back then. He
wasn't fighting now, either, though no longer by choice. The policeman's
back just passed the sixty meter mark then.

She would grieve later. She would exact vengeance. On that day, that
never ending hot day, she could only watch.

The two figures got to the turn. As her father stopped to look at
the house once, the grey shape of the executioner paused, outlined so
clearly against the house behind him. For a moment, the policeman
stood still, a perfect outline like so many Ariel has seen at the
range. Then David resumed his shuffle and the two disappeared from
sight.

6 comments:

  1. I am enjoying Oleg's writing as much as his photographic work.

    Bob
    III

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  2. Me too...but it's haunting.

    Miss Violet

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  3. I was expecting a satisfied ending, but the unfortunate point sure got across.

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  4. As was I, but there would be no lesson in that. The cavalry doesn't always show up just in time, and sometimes that's not Clint Eastwood's silhouette on the ridgeline.

    They will come for you whether you have the capacity to resist or not. The question is instead, what price will they pay when they do?
    Poor choices insure poor outcomes. Resist.

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  5. I only hope it isn't like this at my home. I'd rather take some with me as I resist.....I'm not a sheep.
    Papa MIke
    III

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